Sunday, May 26, 2013

WeWriWa o5.26.13

Welcome to another week of Weekend Writing Warriors/Snippet Sunday! I know you have been waiting all week to read more of Karlea and Armani :)

So last week, Karlea started to kick Armani's ass, high on his blood. This week the battle continues...


Karlea had never experienced a rage so strong, not even when she was high on Jake or Vaughn's blood; she was going to rip Armani apart and get that key, gain her freedom back. Armani laughed as his body smashed into the wall, "Your strength is magnificent and your rage is just...beautiful."
"Shut up!" Karlea screamed, unable to control herself as she smashed him up against the wall again. 
"So meant to be one of us..." Armani grinned. 
Karlea stared at him and then slapped him hard across the face; he just looked at her and laughed before doing the same to her, giving her some resistance to see how she would react.  It hurt, but the rage still burned enough for her to turn back to Armani with an evil smile while looking him in the eye, and say sarcastically, "Ouch," before lifting Armani by the shirt collar and throwing him across the room. 

That boy is in trouble. Karlea may just prove that she is too much to handle.

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Hearts & Stars,
~Siren

27 comments:

  1. Oh no, should Armani encourage Karlea to slap him around. Then again, maybe he likes it. lol Enjoyed the snippet. :)

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    1. Armani loves it! :)
      Thanks for reading! Happy Sunday!

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  3. Yeah! she is all powerful now, he'll get what he deserves... hum... maybe not... he might as well be playing weak just to anger her even more when she is too tired to answer.
    So many possibilities here!

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    1. Maybe at some point he will wear her out good ;)
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  4. It'll be good for him to be taken down a peg or three . . . Go, Karlea!

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    1. How long will he be taken down, though, is the question.
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  5. I agree with Sarah W. This will do him good.

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    1. Or it will possibly piss him off more ;)
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  6. "Your strength is magnificent and your rage is just...beautiful." He's so proud of his creation. And so arrogant. Looking forward to her kicking his butt.

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    1. He is very proud of his creation, will he keep her that way?
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  7. I love an ass-kicking woman! This is awesome! Well done, Siren!

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  8. Nice fight scene. Excellent snippet.

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    1. Thank you! I'm finding that writing fight scenes is tricky.

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  9. Quite a battle! I'm happy to see Armani getting more than he may have bargained for - great snippet.

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    1. Thanks for reading! Armani will take a beating before its over.

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  10. Awesome! My favorite from these two so far. Armani is finally get some of what he deserves. He's really a creep, imho. Then again, he is a vampire. Nice job!

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    1. I'm glad this is your fav :) The beating continues next week.
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  11. He seems to be "feeding" off her rage - wonder where this will end up!

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    1. He is definitely feeding off her rage. Thanks for reading!

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  12. Great interaction and I love his snide comments he gives her back. I think you're doing a great job with the fight scene.

    History Sleuth's Milk Carton Murders

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    1. Thank you!
      That's Armani, he always has a snide comment to get her going.

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  13. Finally, a heroine who gives back as good as she gets. And maybe even better!

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    1. Thank you! :) This is my first novel attempt, I've been mostly writing screenplays prior to this.

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