Sunday, February 9, 2014

WeWriWa o2.o9.14

Welcome to another week of Weekend Writing Warriors/Snippet Sunday!

Where we left off last time, Armani was leading a group of four drunk college girls into the alley to feed...

Everything seemed to move in slow motion as Armani stared into her eyes, mesmerizing her; he lifted his hand to her cheek, drawing her in for what she thought was a kiss. Armani bypassed her lips, going straight for her neck, planting a gentle kiss on it, and then biting down; the girl moaned in pain, but still mesmerized, was oblivious to what was happening. It was an easy kill, and Armani drank until her heart stopped beating, watching the two other girls enjoying each other. She tasted nowhere near as good as Karlea, Armani longed for her. 

Time to freak out cigarette girl, Armani thought. He pulled away from the dead girl, taking a piece of her throat with it. He spit it out onto the ground in front of cigarette girl, his face covered in blood. Cigarette girl screamed, and Armani quickly appeared behind her, breaking her neck, letting the limp body hit the ground, he didn't want to drink from toxic death. 

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Enjoy your week! I will hopefully make a post soon about my epic trip to Los Angeles last weekend that I ditched following AFI back east for, and my current addiction to Noise :)

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  1. Yikes! That was intense. Very well done.

  2. Nice! And even vampires have standards and know that cigarettes are bad for you!

  3. Nothing good ever comes from inhaling smoke from burning leaves. Certainly bad for your throat.

  4. Daaaaaaaaaaamn. Nice details, and a brutal scene -- well done!