Sunday, July 19, 2015

WeWriWa o7.19.15

Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors/Snippet Sunday! 

I hope everyone is doing great, as we continue on with this hot little scene with Armani & Karlea...

Armani's tongue felt so incredible on her, she could barely hold on; she wriggled her wrists from his gasp just enough to turn her hands palm up and grab onto his wrists, digging her nails into him.
Armani kept caressing her as he felt her tense up around him, the rest of her body unable to move from feeling so good and relaxed. She was about to come, and just as she did, Armani bit down, her blood filling his mouth as she screamed out her orgasm. Armani had promised her a screamfest when he met her at Flesh - although he meant it in another way - however, this was so much better. He let go of her wrists and sat up, smiling at her as he wiped the blood from his mouth. She smiled, out of breath and sat up, wrapping her arms around his neck.
"That was incredible," She whispered.
Armani raised his eyebrows and smiled again, she kissed him passionately as she pulled him down and parted her legs for him, as an invitation.


Ugh...that 8 sentence limit again :p More next week!

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15 comments:

  1. These two are so meant for each other LOL. BTW, it's a ten sentence limit nowadays, if that helps!

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    1. Really 10?!! That does help!! Thanks :)

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  2. I like the little 'joke' about a screamfest and how it has become so much more. A sense of humor is vital in a lover,.. man or more.

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    1. When Armani promised her a screamfest when he first met her, I knew damn well, I had to have it mentioned again later because the line was so Armani ;)
      Thanks for reading!

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  3. Is it hot in here or is it just me? Suggestion: tense and tension are used too close together. I'd change one of the words to something else for stronger impact. And speaking of impact - whew!

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    1. Nancy, thank you so much for your suggestion. This is a WIP, so any editing advice I can get along the way is great!
      And it is definitely hot in here :)

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    2. I also like how you put that, "for stronger impact".
      >:D

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  4. Wow, you really sunk your teeth into that scene! I think that blood might be boiling!

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  5. Love the joke on the screamfest.

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    1. The original short story I wrote before I decided to turn this into a novel, had a way more unsexy, brutal scene, where he did reference the screamfest out loud.
      Thanks for reading!

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  6. I'm sure Armani is far from finished with her, she is going to have more surprises!

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