Sunday, May 21, 2017

WeWriWa / Snippet Sunday o5.21.17

Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors / Snippet Sunday!

Where we last left off Karlea accepted his invitation to breakfast in bed. Armani promised to be gentle with her, but he was anything but...

Armani pulled away, watching her chest heave from her rapid breathing. He brought his hand to his mouth, biting down. Karlea pulled his hand away, shaking her head.
"You don't want it?" Armani asked. 
"No," Karlea answered, watching his blood drip, "I mean I do, but..."
"You want to see what its like without it and see if last night was real." Armani finished her sentence for her.
"Yes." She replied. 


Super short, but that's ten. Can't wait for Armani's cocky reply!

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Bleeding Hearts & Fangs, ~Siren X

11 comments:

  1. Really good snippet proving you don't need a bunch of words to express what's happening.

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    1. Very true! Thanks, Charmaine! Happy Sunday!

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  2. He seems to know exactly what she wants, though it doesn't always mesh with his wants.

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    1. He does! Most of the time he just knows because he is so in tune with her, although its hardly ever on the same page as his wants. Other times, he'll use his mind reading gift to know.

      Thanks for reading!

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  3. Ooo I like the cliffhangery end to the snippet. :D

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    1. Hehehe. Will he force her or comply with her wishes?

      Thanks for reading!

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  4. I can see her point in wanting to know if what she felt was real or the blood talking. Great snippet. Short but powerful.

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  5. Ooh, interesting glimpse into how this works.

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  6. I'm really glad she's standing up to him. He's a wee bit pushy.

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  7. You are such a tease to leave us hanging. Good snippet.

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  8. Why do I have the feeling she is trying to go back to being her true self and he is not going to let her?

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