Sunday, April 22, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday o4.22.12

Happy Earth Day!

We are going to pick up where we left off last week.  Karlea has come over to Jake and Vaughn finally and she loses herself in Jake.

She had eyed him across the bar earlier, but now up close he was more than just hot; he was the most beautiful man she had ever seen. His chin length, straight, dark hair accented his pale skin in just the right combination. He wasn't so pale that he looked dead - like most of goth clubgoers, who put way too much white face powder on, making it apparent that it was fake. His skin tone was naturally pale; his dark hair making it look slightly paler; she would have been surprised if she found that his paleness was makeup induced. 
She noticed his blue-grey eyes from the light of the bar. They reminded her of the water at the pier during a warm summer storm.

Well, that's six - so more to come next week. I will continue this.

Now go check out more sixers here.

And now go do something nice to celebrate our Earth!


  1. I bet that his paleness has nothing at all to do with make-up. ;-)

    1. :)
      Thanks for checking mine out and commenting! i promise to do the same!

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    1. Thank you!
      i wrote this at 3am saturday morning, so i'm glad it still sounded as good as it did then.
      Another sixer wanted more description after last week's six, so being as I'm still on my 1st draft of this novel, I figured she was right and added more. Working out well, I think.

  3. It's a good descriptive six, Siren. It definitely sets the mood. :)